Neotone
Joined: 04/22/02
Posts: 70
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Check out my new track, "Moterize" 
Song Page: Moterize
I'm curious what people think of my lyrics...
Download: Moterize BY: Neotone
Stream: Moterize BY: Neotone
This life is a joke, and nobody's laughing.
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(((stereofect)))
Joined: 09/02/01
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 1333
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Your lyrics are always unique and inspired.
Groovy, laidback and funky.....
“Any intelligent fool can make things bigger, more complex, and more violent. It takes a touch of genius — and a lot of courage — to move in the opposite direction.” Albert Einstein
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A Bit Crusher
Joined: 01/26/02
Location: Tilburg
Posts: 1794
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(haven't heard much lyrics yet)...
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Neotone
Joined: 04/22/02
Posts: 70
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(((stereofect))) wrote: Your lyrics are always unique and inspired.
But only one other song on there has any lyrics, and that's just humbligadibeedelbadlabigerambulus 
Unless you refer to the track I've deleted... 
This life is a joke, and nobody's laughing.
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Kylo
Joined: 02/16/05
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 787
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Hell yeyah~ 
Nice groove... I got hooked bad on that screeching synth at 20 secs.
The high-hat breaks remind me of dirty south music. hehe...
Heard some vibrato in the vocals here and there-  that's tough, great work controlling that.
Lyrics: very fitting, perfect level on the reverb- mends with the music, etc... when you say cat- it gets a lil' muffled but hey, I know it's a pain in the ass to change one little thing when the rest was perfect. "I can't help but just laugh" Great choice of words. 
"Energizer bunny arrested- charged with battery."
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Michael Chocholak
Joined: 01/14/04
Posts: 135
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love the slow motile groove. yeah, and the synth. like the gasping vocals best, but it all works - like the fact that you break to kick the main vocals in. interesting lyrics - which if you're going to do vocals you've gotta make sure the lyrics are worth it. as usual dig the music end. nice track.
Que la musique sonne - Edgard Varese
You don't need a mouth to communicate, you don't need rules to create. Anything is a potential instrument. Play it. - MC
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(((stereofect)))
Joined: 09/02/01
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 1333
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I was thinking of this thread when I replied.
But I'd be more than happy to retract my comments.
“Any intelligent fool can make things bigger, more complex, and more violent. It takes a touch of genius — and a lot of courage — to move in the opposite direction.” Albert Einstein
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A Bit Crusher
Joined: 01/26/02
Location: Tilburg
Posts: 1794
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Neotone wrote:[quote="(((stereofect)))"].....Unless you refer to the track I've deleted...
No, I reacted too soon....
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Neotone
Joined: 04/22/02
Posts: 70
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Oh yeah, THOSE lyrics. Thanks... I'm glad people like them. ^_^
This life is a joke, and nobody's laughing.
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Multi-Panel
Joined: 09/23/01
Posts: 217
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hehe all those oldskool sounds are hilarious
some of the synths are too harsh though. i definetely liked the vocal part.
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Neotone
Joined: 04/22/02
Posts: 70
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A Bit Crusher wrote:(haven't heard much lyrics yet)...
That is the perfect icon for this song. It's almost the same tempo even
This life is a joke, and nobody's laughing.
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