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Alexander Du Bois
Joined: 08/14/07
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Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Monday, August 20, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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Hey guys. Shame this website doesnt get more views. I'd love for some comments/more advice. I obviously love making music but want to make it better. Subtronik was the only guy to comment on my last song and i've tried to use it.
Let me know what you think again!
many thanks x
http://www.artistserver.com/artist/song.cfm/a/21715/tid/17888/Alexander_Du_Bois
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A Bit Crusher
Joined: 01/26/02
Location: Tilburg
Posts: 1794
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RE: Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Monday, August 20, 2007 at 10:58 AM
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Hi, will have a listen later on, at this moment AS is extremely slow........
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Subtronik
Joined: 01/14/03
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RE: Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Monday, August 20, 2007 at 5:31 PM
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It's far from what I normally listen to, so I'll do my best to give a non bias opinion.
Pros: Interesting, lively, upbeat. Hip retro style. This sounds like a mix of styles from bands like Simply Red, Cocteau Twins, Joy Division. I like the spoken French in the beginning (I'd like a whole song with French lyrics only). The beat is good.
Cons: A lot of this sounds lo-fi, especially the guitar recording and vocals. The vocals are a bit abrasive at times.
Thanks for the review of Pugnax.
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P9FM
Joined: 03/29/02
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RE: Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Wednesday, August 22, 2007 at 5:17 PM
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Your vocals are great. I don't know whether or not to agree with Sub on the guitars. Part of me likes the contrast of your vocals with the raw demo quality guitars. It works less well in the instrumental parts.
not an Obliminal thought in his head
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hellscion
Joined: 04/05/06
Posts: 338
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RE: Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Sunday, September 2, 2007 at 4:40 AM
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well im at a loss for words. uhhh 
yes i think you have enough skill with music but perhaps too much as this is kind-of.. bizarre. unique though so i have to give you credit. do you listen to reggae?
“We tend to forget that happiness doesn't come as a result of getting something we don't have, but rather of recognizing and appreciating what we do have." - Frederick Keonig
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A Bit Crusher
Joined: 01/26/02
Location: Tilburg
Posts: 1794
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RE: Second song with Subtronik advice used!
Sunday, September 2, 2007 at 10:11 AM
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I think the track sounds too much like a raw demo, I do have to say this kind of music is not really my cup of tea...
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