hellscion
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quite a lot to this one.. it alternates between different styles of techno.
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Neotone
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RE: you are wrong
Saturday, November 17, 2007 at 6:12 PM
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The opening sounds like a song from the computer game Descent. (That's a good thing.  ) I hear some dissonance around 1:56, and 3:15, which comes from using the same bassline throughout even when it does not jive with the rest of the chart. I like the running line around 2:20. Groovy stuff around 4:06. There's a sudden drop in volume around 4:55--in fact that whole fade-out is a little spotty to me.
All in all, I like it. It's a departure from most techno, which some people say is boring and repetitive. 
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hellscion
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RE: you are wrong
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 9:40 AM
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just try to argue with the title, bwahaha 
jk i wouldve added more variation to the bassline but the particular instrument was aligned with the kicks so it was a delicate mixture, for a rough song. perhaps in the future hmmm
thanks for checkin it out dude
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A Bit Crusher
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RE: you are wrong
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 10:27 AM
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Streaming.....
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Subtronik
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RE: you are wrong
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 1:00 PM
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I like how this starts, but the intro melody sounds way off key (it straightens out later on).
Some nice construction but again I'm hearing a lot of dissonance (like neotone mentioned). I think it might be the main fat synth you're using for the melody. That sound may have some parameter issues which is causing the overall dissonance.
At 4:54 the volume drops out yet the track continues for another entire minute. It sounds like a mistake.
A little simple for my tastes and not your best.
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hellscion
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RE: you are wrong
Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 8:26 PM
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heh, damn i think i should stop experimenting outside of my sound. it has been difficult for thinking of what to do next with songs like this and alchemeia. 
how i forget that i am.. dark >: D
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A Bit Crusher
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RE: you are wrong
Wednesday, November 21, 2007 at 2:49 PM
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I don't think it's that bad at all....I'll have another listen.....
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hellscion
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RE: you are wrong
Wednesday, November 21, 2007 at 4:30 PM
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thanks bc. ill be honest i liked it mostly for the chords & melody of it. i was stuck in the mixing process adjusting volume levels & as my UK techno friends have told me a lot of the time you really need someone else to tell you when something is too loud or quiet..
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A Bit Crusher
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Thursday, November 22, 2007 at 11:40 AM
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I agree about the chords & melody....you have a good feeling for it...
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DoublePlusGood
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RE: you are wrong
Friday, November 23, 2007 at 3:14 PM
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I like the change up in 1:45, took some of the monotony out of the melody and beat, the counterpoint lower synth is neat, and the sounds following in that filter sweep-y arpeggio is neat. Outro is a little abrupt for me, and then the fade is still kinda slow, feels a little unmusical. All in all though well produced trancy style track.
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hellscion
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RE: you are wrong
Friday, November 23, 2007 at 6:42 PM
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hmm this has been the thing about artistserver.. ive had problems with people on forums of all sorts for every reason you can think of. but here people are very honest of what they have to say and as well actually know what theyre talking about. to the following artists, i say hell yea
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